Tuesday, September 30, 2008

The Wind...


A blow of wind came from the window,
while I was asleep in a mellow dream,
the sky still dark with the moon in the corner,
filled with grey up to the brim.

The blowing wind takes along my rage,
for breaking the fragile walls of my dream,
i take a leap towards the kitchen,
consoling my soul…so bustling so serene..

My nerves sense the danger,
and my eyes shut with pain,
a heartless piece of glass,
has hurt my foot frame.

Pieces of crimson glass,
are shattered on the floor,
shining in the moonlight,
and red drops in galore.

A vase lie down..broken..helplessly on the floor

The reality flickered…
The memories shivered…
He is no more!!
It was a dream…delicate…broken…crimson

Oh wind …the wild wind….
You left a storm behind…

5 comments:

Seeker of life!!! said...
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Seeker of life!!! said...

Oh my my my... Your poetries have a great potential... I find them enchanting.

I think whenever my mind will go through mental block or something, I will read them... Two things will happen, one, it will take me to another place from where I can help myself out... and second, it will be emotionally pleasantly whacky... Fresh wind will enter my mind and Block will be no more a block but soon an opprtunity to travel to another destination...

Thanks for the poetry. And please don't feel, I am overestimating or something. I really liked it. Kudos...

Rucha said...

hey tejas...m glad u liked it... thanx for being a critic nd a motivator at the same time...
:P

laxmikant paradkar said...

good..... very good..... very very good.

bas aur jhut nahi bol sakta.

hahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very nice keep on...

Unknown said...

this ones brilliant beautiful.