Saturday, September 13, 2008

The Trip..

The children of wild innocence on a trip...
They walk into the bus to a silent trip...
the smoke gathers,
the tongue penetrating in to take the taste,
their hearts withered together..singing the songs of silence...
and their bodies lie calmly on the floor,
the children on a trip to a immortal shore...!

7 comments:

Paul Syng said...

Rucha,

I'm glad you have taken to blogging. It will give you instant feedback of your work. Keep up the spirits.

Cheers

AMRUTACHA PUNERI KUCHKAT-BANA said...

yeah...thanx...
my writings were lying in the book..it feels great to display it after a long time....

Kanishka said...

This reminds a bit of morrison here...

AMRUTACHA PUNERI KUCHKAT-BANA said...

it reminds u about morrison??? i am pleased!!! Thanx a lot..!!

flower-power said...

Fuck fuck fuck...killer shit!
Yea it does remind me of Morisson too...he's a poet turned muse for millions! :)

Kanishka said...

This is the best part of the trip.
This is the trip, the best part
I really like it.

Seeker of life!!! said...

Hmmm... Btw I would like to g on this trip...

When are we leaving?