Friday, September 12, 2008

The morning dew

Underneath the face I met the real you,
like one is amazed to touch the morning dew..

the world looks in anger..sometimes smiles,
but they never see inside you what truly lies..

they want you to do things they have done,
but they never feel your dreams and your passion..

In the darkened crowd my eyes find you,
like a drop of white cloud on the blue..

I feel i have known you before,
like waves going back after touching the shore..

You look at me and feel the same,
we unconsciously blame the mind game.

But it's too late to turn back,
there are no backward ways that can be tracked.

I am amazed to touch the morning dew,
because I am already now a part of YOU...!

9 comments:

laxmikant paradkar said...

i loved it.......

who has written this?

it is indeed beautiful...

AMRUTACHA PUNERI KUCHKAT-BANA said...

thankyou...
dude its written by me for a person....

Kanishka said...

yeah i liked it too... good re..
i really don get time to upload my stuff re... chal now i will too...

neha said...

Wow.. nice!

flower-power said...

Wow!! Awesome stuff...i din know u write such amazin poetry! :)
Keep it rollin...

Rucha said...

hey thanx gal..
well, use to write before, but never shared it with anyone..so thought of creating a blog.....
more stuff to come...
hope you will like it... :)

Prajay Shah said...

beatiful thought...???..

AMRUTACHA PUNERI KUCHKAT-BANA said...

its a question or a compliment?

Unknown said...

hey u can start in magzines re


this one is really cool