The wall departed and I saw fog….
A pale touch and it turned into smoke
The fairy tales wither away
Found the lost fantasy world at bay
The nomadic world will never flock
This land is for the farmers of smoke
Cultivation of tripy fields
We wait for the harvest
Every weed of our fate
Deep down stored in the locked closet
The field’s on fire every day..every night
The inner self at its peak
With the gods of water we fight...
The fields turn into ashes
And we rise for a new yield
Like a phoenix ... from the ashes of weed….
A pale touch and it turned into smoke
The fairy tales wither away
Found the lost fantasy world at bay
The nomadic world will never flock
This land is for the farmers of smoke
Cultivation of tripy fields
We wait for the harvest
Every weed of our fate
Deep down stored in the locked closet
The field’s on fire every day..every night
The inner self at its peak
With the gods of water we fight...
The fields turn into ashes
And we rise for a new yield
Like a phoenix ... from the ashes of weed….
3 comments:
Very deep and profound poetry... What I liked about it is, though your pholosophy is letting others to peep in there, it will only tempt those who are real wanderers of life... So it will always remain the locked closet... but for thinkers endless land for cultivating thoughts...
You know there is a saying in Marathi, A poet even sees which is even beyond the reach of sun...
I think this was deepest and best one... Keep it up!
farmers of smoke wachali..ani purnapane halun gelo...kahi dukha hi swataha anubhawalyashiway shabdat pakadata yet nahit..he dukh..
suruwatila kavita tevdhi pakad ghet nahiye..pan shewatachya 3 olinni purna kavita uchalun dharali ahe..ania khup unchiwar neun thevali ahe..
hope tula raag ala nasel...khup chan ahet ya 3 oli...
grace chya 3 oli ahet..
chal jau dur kuthehi..
hatat jara de haat..
bhar rastyamadhe majha honar kadhitari ghaat...
rucha..shabdanchi denagi ahe tula..ayushyat kashasathihi lihina sodu nakos..
Harshad...
i really appreciate ur comments guys...
@tejas - m trying to reach the sun..going beyond it mite b a destiny!! i really thank u for motivatg me..i wud hv left my passion long back!! thnx
@harshad - u found ur hidden meaning of this poetry is wat i really liked! i nev thot this poem can hv diffrnt perspectives!..u specially called me up for this poetry is wat i really value..thnx a lot! asach motivate karat raha :)
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